
Originally Posted by
UltimateZeroStar
Welcome back King!
Didn't think we'd see a sequel to Trailer Park Brawl but I really enjoyed it. The way in which Beatrice sought out revenge on Torrie was very calculated. I really like that. The first humiliation wasn't public enough, so Beatrice got Torrie back on stage at her job. It was kinda petty but I could feel something there between these two. They're very similar but come from different places in life.
Stripping on stage was really good. The comparisons alone were more than worth the public venue. Plus the humiliation Torrie must feel, cumming on stage in front of her regulars. That moment now lives on in that club. The beer at the end really was a definitive moment for Beatrice going forward, if you ever make a sequel.
Those pending stories sound interesting. A follow up to Hidden spectators sounds really interesting, Wipe down, too. I'm super curious about the Maggie story and what you would change about it now. I had no idea you were rewriting Spy War. Either way, I look forward to whatever you can get out! The stories are always fun!
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