Quote Originally Posted by UltimateZeroStar View Post
Welcome back King!

Didn't think we'd see a sequel to Trailer Park Brawl but I really enjoyed it. The way in which Beatrice sought out revenge on Torrie was very calculated. I really like that. The first humiliation wasn't public enough, so Beatrice got Torrie back on stage at her job. It was kinda petty but I could feel something there between these two. They're very similar but come from different places in life.

Stripping on stage was really good. The comparisons alone were more than worth the public venue. Plus the humiliation Torrie must feel, cumming on stage in front of her regulars. That moment now lives on in that club. The beer at the end really was a definitive moment for Beatrice going forward, if you ever make a sequel.

Those pending stories sound interesting. A follow up to Hidden spectators sounds really interesting, Wipe down, too. I'm super curious about the Maggie story and what you would change about it now. I had no idea you were rewriting Spy War. Either way, I look forward to whatever you can get out! The stories are always fun!

Good comment. As I noted before, what I really like about this series is the symmetry. Torrie humiliates Beatrice in Beatrice's domain -the trailer park that Beatrice owns, in front of all the paople who are supposed to respect her and pay her rent. Beatrice gets Torrie back in almost exactly the same way -in Torrie's domain, in front of her regular customers. Beatrice evens things out by dousing her rival with beer, even forcing Torrie to drink beer dripping off Beatrice's body parts as Torrie did to her (Torrie off the ass, Beatrice off the pussy) and then spits on her - exactly like Torrie did to her. Now, the women are even- Beatrice may even be a bit ahead - and that sets the story up for the inevitable tie-breaker.

It's a great piece of work and I hope we see more of it.

I'm not surprised at all we got a sequel - the original was certainly set up for that - but I am pleasantly surprised it came so soon.

JB